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    Time to chase the stars Outlaws!

    Ok, I want this to be a strictly rp thread, and would appreciate it if you message me with questions. I've tried this idea before with a friend and it fell through, but I wanna do it anyway. The scene is Blue Heaven after Hilda's death, and Gene and Co. are waiting for the ship to be done. Im also very easy on beginning rpers

    The pale blue-green eyes danced as the crew left the ship in the Docking bay. The slim figure of an eighteen year old girl walked forward to Swanzo, dressed in a top supporting the growing chest and shorts with heart shaped holes cut out, blonde hair tied up in a ponytail and blades with heart-shaped connecting hilts on hips, all topped by a sunny smile. "Hey Swanzo! Is this the ship Hilda was hiding? It's cool!" the girl said as she stopped, her smile faltering as she looked at the suited repairman. "Swanzo?" she asked. "Hilda's dead Mina. Horus is gone too" he said with a Corvian word untranslated. The girl, Mina, collasped to her knees in shock. "That cant be! Hilda owes me dinner!" Mina protested tearing up as she accepted the loss of the closest mother-figure she ever knew in her orphan life. She looked behind her at the fading figures of the crew of the ship. She gets up and starts walking after them, passing a wanted poster with the same smiling face on it. Mina, also known as the Space Thief, wanted Dead or Alive for 500,00W
    "You can never count on anyone but yourself, but then sometimes, you just want to feel the warmth of another body, you know?" -Hot Ice Hilda
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    RE: Time to chase the stars Outlaws!

    (It's been ages since I've attempted this, but I messaged Rilan for some pointers. I'm still not 100% sure whether this will be correct, but I choose to be Gene Starwind. Who wouldn't? As with Flare's RP thread, I will use the same writing style with italics for thoughts. As I don't think I'm supposed to write Mina's dialogue, this might be rather short. However, I can't really make this work without writing some of Jim's dialogue, at least until somebody steps in and chooses the role of Jim.)

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    A voice echoes across the large hangar but is muffled by the noise of machinery. Gene stops in his tracks, and pauses for a few seconds. Jim looks up towards his friend. "Is something the matter, Gene?" After focusing on the sounds around him for a second longer, Gene responds. "No, it's nothing. I could have sworn I heard something. 'Must have been my imagination." "Yeah, I guess so!", Jim chortles. The two continue forwards, with a rather perplexed Melfina trailing behind.

    Gene definitely hears something this time, and turns around to see a young woman sprinting in his direction. "What the hec—"
    Many moments later, he feels somebody prodding him. "Gene! Take your eyes off her breasts for two seconds!", Jim yells. Gene glances upwards and towards the unknown woman's entrancing eyes. "Um, nice cleavage." Jim punches him in the side swiftly. "Oof! I meant... hi, how are you?", Gene says with a sheepish grin, scratching his head.
    Gene: "Have faith in me guys, enjoy the ride—you're in good hands. I can handle this. I can do it!"
    Jim: "How do you know?"
    Gene: "I don't!"
    Jim: "I knew it."
    Gene: "That's okay. There's a first time for everything!"

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    RE: Time to chase the stars Outlaws!

    (to Mantis, and all other rpers,I wrote in first Person for my characters,and third for others)


    I ran down the ramp after the departing trio, quickly gaining ground as they stop, hearing my approach. I barely hear his comment as I get in front of him, before I keep moving into him. I grab the red head's straps on his shirt as I drive him into a post,pulling out a blade. "Why is Hilda dead?! Why did you allow her to die?" I asked him as I keep him pinned, the blade to his throat as I tear up the tracks of previous tears on my face as the boy kept the girl behind his small body
    "You can never count on anyone but yourself, but then sometimes, you just want to feel the warmth of another body, you know?" -Hot Ice Hilda
    "Hey O'Connell! Looks like I got all the horses!"
    "Hey Beni! Looks like you're on the wrong side of the river!" Beni & Rick, The Mummy
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    RE: Time to chase the stars Outlaws!

    (Oh, now you tell me. I suppose I'll follow that trend, although I think we should stick to the past tense which is easier in first person than the present tense. )

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    I was taken by surprise. This lady's more feisty than I could have ever expected. I guess I let my perversions get the better of me. Jim's voice resounded in my head; "Women will be the death of you some day." I snapped out of my daydreaming, noticing the blade against my throat. My head hurt, but I finally comprehended what she was saying. "Wait... Hilda? And you've got a knife to my throat? Are you a Kei Pirate?" I let out a small sigh as I saw tears trickle down the mysterious woman's face. "No, this definitely isn't a pirate," I thought to myself. Her grip loosened. "But I'm not about to let my guard down either."

    I pushed her away and she thrust her blade at me. In quick succession, I deflected her arm, exposing her back, and applied a choke hold. She dropped the weapon, and I had the upper hand. "How the hell did you know Hilda? Did Swanzo tell you?" She remained silent. I continued. "...Hilda died at Farfallus for reasons I can't go into—not until I know I can trust you. We were friends." I firmly held the blade down with my foot and let her free. "I think you've got some explaining to do."
    Gene: "Have faith in me guys, enjoy the ride—you're in good hands. I can handle this. I can do it!"
    Jim: "How do you know?"
    Gene: "I don't!"
    Jim: "I knew it."
    Gene: "That's okay. There's a first time for everything!"

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    RE: Time to chase the stars Outlaws!

    (You're welcome. And I'll try my best. My brain sometimes goes faster than my fingers )

    I look at him as the boy tapped out on his little computer. "Be careful Gene" the girl said as he fought back and held me as I look at him as he kept me in the choke hold. I turn and grab my other blade as I got distance between us. "Hilda was the closest woman I had for a mother. I was abandoned here, and Hilda took me when I was six, catching me in the act of stealing to survive." I said as I kept crying. "I know Hilda stole a ship from the Kei Pirates because I helped her track it down, along with the girl who is part of the ship. Now, why is Hilda dead? Why did you let her die, and why do you have the stolen ship?" I ask him

    "Gene be careful!" Jim hissed in Gene's ear. "She's a bounty head and she does not look like she take any games from you." he said softly looking at her
    "You can never count on anyone but yourself, but then sometimes, you just want to feel the warmth of another body, you know?" -Hot Ice Hilda
    "Hey O'Connell! Looks like I got all the horses!"
    "Hey Beni! Looks like you're on the wrong side of the river!" Beni & Rick, The Mummy
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