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    Smile Work in progress !!

    Why not showing some progress?

    Since i can remember i've always loved cartoons, i would watch way too much TV when i was a kid and would try making my own stories. I know very well that my drawings aren't the best but i try changing that everyday, as mentioned in the title, my creations will be FOREVER a work in progress since there's always room for improvement.

    I'll post some of my artwork that i've done recently and see what you guys think of it.

    I'll upload more things with the time, the only rule is i've got to get better with every upload.


    Outlaw Star drawings (click for full size):

    -Gene Starwind



    -Melfina



    -"Twilight" Suzuka



    -Aisha Clan-Clan






    -Some random drawing i did while making these





    I apologise if the camera wasn't good enough, i do not currently own a scanner or something to show them better, i took the pictures with my silly phone.



    For now that'll be all, feedback is always appreciated, feel free to share your thoughts and thanks for your time.
    THE GREATEST

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    Those are pretty nice! I quite like Gene and Aisha #1!
    If I could offer a bit of constructive criticism, I think Melfina's head is a bit small information the drawing. May want to make it a little bigger next time.
    But they're all quite good!


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    I really like all of them myself, but I definitely agree that the first Aisha one is one of the cutest! I think they're all really fun and enjoyable to look at~ Can I hug them all too?
    "I don't know what words I can say
    The wind has a way to talk to me
    Flowers sleep, a silent lullaby
    I pray for reply
    I'm ready"
    -Melfina's Song

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    I really like these. Unlike a lot of artists who try to imitate the original art style, you've reimagined the characters in a different design; a bit chibi-like but also quite western-looking. Perhaps even a bit of a Skullgirls style? I'd sure as hell love to see the Outlaw Star characters in that game. (Well, the girls I guess.) Brilliant stuff. Keep it up!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Juneberry View Post
    I really like all of them myself, but I definitely agree that the first Aisha one is one of the cutest! I think they're all really fun and enjoyable to look at~ Can I hug them all too?
    Thanks, yes Aisha is best character! You can hug them all you want just don't come crying to me when you have paper cuts all over your arms.

    Quote Originally Posted by pseudohippie View Post
    Those are pretty nice! I quite like Gene and Aisha #1!
    If I could offer a bit of constructive criticism, I think Melfina's head is a bit small information the drawing. May want to make it a little bigger next time.
    But they're all quite good!
    Thanks a lot, Aisha is my favorite and was super fun to draw, about Melfina she has a lot of hair and i didn't want her head to look too big maybe that's why the face looks a bit small? I tried too hard for it to not look weird. Thanks for the criticism.


    Quote Originally Posted by Mantis View Post
    I really like these. Unlike a lot of artists who try to imitate the original art style, you've reimagined the characters in a different design; a bit chibi-like but also quite western-looking. Perhaps even a bit of a Skullgirls style? I'd sure as hell love to see the Outlaw Star characters in that game. (Well, the girls I guess.) Brilliant stuff. Keep it up!
    Thanks a lot, i've always loved all of the characters from Skullgirls, the art is amazing hopefully someday i'll get as good
    THE GREATEST

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